What’s the acronym? SMH? For this one I’ll let you enjoy discovering the numerous errors for yourself. Didn’t these people even take English in High School? And where the hell is the editor? Even a basic stupid computerized grammar checker would have caught these errors.
Longmont Woman Draws National Attention In TSA Groping Case « CBS Denver.
I just finished Eating Animals by Jonathan Safran Foer. Had I not capitalized and italicized the words “eating animals,” you may have interpreted that previous sentence differently. His book largely confirms what I had known prior: factory farms are no good for anyone but the owners, and especially no good for the animals they produce.
I won’t launch into a tirade on the evils of factory farming here. Foer does enough proselytizing in his book. Much as I critique local theatrical productions, I shall comment briefly on the form and the quality of his writing, for one can have the most righteous cause but without eloquence be heard by no one. Or the complete opposite, such as Hitler (who was a vegetarian, by the way).
The last liftoff of the Space Shuttle program was just now, a program that is almost as old as I. I cannot remember a time in my life there was not another STS mission on the horizon. The US government will no longer have any ships to take us into space. What will be our next vehicle? When will we return to the Moon or beyond, perhaps to Mars? How shall we inspire our dreams?
It was an awful story anyway, but paragraph four begins with the following sentence:
It was not immediately clearly when Anthony could be released.
Immediately clearly … what?! WHAT?! I NEED TO KNOW! Two adverbs after each other, but what do they modify? AARGH!
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via Casey Anthony Sentenced To 4 Years - Denver News Story - KMGH Denver.
The Internet is full of everything you could imagine.
I especially like this one: check out the trees on either side.
Very clever PSA from across the pond.
Notice any discrepancies? Like the fact that Colorado Blvd is East of Broadway?! That’d be some neat trick to get West 14th Ave all the way over there….
Water main break knots traffic at Colorado Blvd. and W. 14th Ave. in Denver - The Denver Post.